Open Poetry #42 |
Read 'Em And Weep...! |
simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
I have made a huge mistake. I was playing cards and ran out of stake. I had no collateral left to use (I'd already lost my shirt and my shoes) And I had a hand that couldn't lose. So seeing that the pot had reached a princely sum, I lost my head to a rush of blood And I bet... My mum. Now there's someone else about whom She constantly feels the need to worry. Now there's someone else who hurries Round once a week for tea Now there's someone else who hopes it's curry. Now there's someone else for whom She'll subconciously wait up 'til quite late And hope he hasn't managed to get himself Into too much of a stste. Now there's someone else who she should Never need to doubt. Who's hard work But she would never be without. And if I've learnt anything from any of this It's to never gamble With the unconditional love That a mother has for her son. Even if you've got a 5,6,7,8 and 9 of diamonds Run... For Mum. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good! Gambling is addicting ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You bet your Mum?!? Now that is what I would call a serious gambling problem! lol Enjoyed your tale! EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great fun to read and great lesson included too! quote: Wise decision! love Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Simon? you bet your Mom? LOL!!! oh my, if my son ever did that to me, well, I think he had better start running too!! very much enjoyed this lovely tale... it's only a tale right... you didn't really do it did you Simon?????? LOL love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Thank you ever so much for your comments, Arctic Wind, JamesMichael, Earth Angel, Margharita & RDB. As ever, all your comments make me oh so happy. RDB of course I didn't really bet my mum... I can imagine just like your son I wouldn't dare! |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Margherita, I spelt your name wrong! Really sorry, I'm a little bit drunk is my excuse (it is Friday!) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
phew! ok, you are now back in my good books Simon! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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