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Freddie the Martian (Part Two)...
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Freddie the Martian (Part Two)... |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
And he ended up talking for hours, about jaw-dropping powers And the sights and secrets that he'd been fortunate enough to have seen. To the World and his wife about the beauty of life and what it all might mean. But no-one was interested And he was nearly arrested On account of him being quite bright green. So he flew back home. Having learnt to be quite cynical About the lesson he gave, thinking how lucky he was to be from HIS planet. Wondering if these people will ever reach their pinnacle Or if they'll ever find the man (or woman) brave enough To plan it. THE END |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I half suspected it would end like this! That's the drama! Clever and thought provoking write, dear Simon. Love, Margherita  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Well done Simon, that was as usual up to your standard. I did not expect that twist to the ending although I should have with you...you really are quite adept at these, now I hope you are composing another as I write because your posts are too few & far between John |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I think I'd like to head for Mars, myself! Mind you, there are those who believe that that is where I come from!  Enjoyed your little green tale!  Nannu Nannu Linda the Space Cadet |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I've dated some women from Venus...James |
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