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Stepping Out
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Stepping Out |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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Stepping Out i don’t need your sugar you just come on down and see my hips twisting, teasing red lipstick smiling cigarette sucking at the Jimson Tree i don’t need your honey you just come on down and see my booty shaking, strutting green eyes snapping blowing smoke rings at the Jimson Tree i ain’t falling to my knees you just come on down and see my body bucking, bouncing silver hoops shining satin cling twirling at the Jimson Tree i don’t need happy endings it’s time to move on and let me be no more fists flying, flailing old bruises fading tired skin healing i am now set free dancing at the Jimson Tree --- Alison (PS ~ this is a story of a person in my mind) [This message has been edited by Alison (02-01-2008 08:57 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A liberating, releasing, eloquent stream of words of a strong woman, with clarity in her mind. Excellent and powerful, dear Alison. love Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Ali... this sounds like the place to be at the Jimson Tree!! I loved it! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, lovely ones. I cherish you both. xoxoxo Ali |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali, nice work, enjoyed it |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Alison- Its really good to write about the person character in your mind! that was a very nice write, I very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"i don’t need happy endings it’s time to move on and let me be" This could apply to me but I know I have to wait for the right time. Enjoyed your words, Alison. Helen |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Thank you for stepping out with me. A ----- AW Thank you, poet friend. A ------ Helen Funny how someone writes something that mirrors our situations or thoughts, isn't it. Fly free, darlin'. Love, A |
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