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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Time No words come silly mute cause you speak like I hear and I can't be your voice nor can you be my ears Can you see all this sand The time may erase it But here I will confess All of my love for you -Juju -Juju |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Oh, I just got it! lol ARCTIC WIND |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Juju, This is an interesting poem, and I like it. Bad ears run in my family. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Intriguing little write that provokes thought. You have a talent for doing that!   EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
An intelligent write with a heartwarming ending. love Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I like this!  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Ah, Thank you every one -Juju |
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