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sickened heart |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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Sickened heart ++++++++++++++++ Hand extends to touch yours and It passes beyond Only the wetness stays on. Without a loss of Something closer to this heart You cannot be touched. Wetness douses into heart. Benumbed I swear! Aggrieved eyes never Absolve you for being you: A thread of deleted mails. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend pod, you heart shows and it is a gentle gift |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Such is the rich diverse tapestry of life & you penned it very eloquently here Ku.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A poignant heart write. You have a natural gift for conveying emotions with few words. Thank you for sharing. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Wonderfully Written ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ku, you certainly succeeded in expressing an injured heart. There seems to be no possible appeal to what you say in your last line, which really hits the target like a deadly arrow. Love, Margherita  |
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