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Hypatia Junior Member
since 2004-03-22
Posts 18 |
A crime? But all were innocent. The victim scarletted the day. Justice donned the cloth's repent. There was no retributed "pay". Blinded by the tears of "done" knowing that the winds had raged seeds of weeds in Eden blown as cancer, patient for its wage. Justice shrouded then her eyes the book she held to keep it chaste knowing that the words would lie when spoken by the men who feigned Wisdom, with perspective, dyed, as Truth imprisoned, convolute, made slashes marking dots of Ides on a virgin prostitute... One lone keeper vigilant can not stop the poison vine. Thus the child contaminant became the same thing by design. Loathesome embryonic seed evolved to demons in the mind; dirtied by no malice, freed, by the crime no one defined. Would only one so ignorant travel regions perilous? Perhaps the burdened penitent felt the need to kill the time. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Outstanding! Welcome to Passions. This is so well written, I'm looking forward to reading you again. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Superb writing! Very powerful. I could relate to a subject about which this may have been written! If it is the one of which I am thinking, you have described it to the tee, and very poetically, if I might say. Welcome to PipTalk. I look forward to reading more of your poetry when I am able. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Deeply impressed, am I. A wow of a write, I look forward to reading more. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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