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Open Poetry #42

Cursing the tears

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

0 posted 2008-03-14 02:47 AM

I hate that time of night
when rest just cant be found
I close my eyes to darkness
your memory all around

I wake to a ghost each morning
remembering where and when
I recall all the smiles and tears
and places that we've been

A time so long ago
you'd think years would dull the pain
I should be used to lonely by now
But somehow its just not the same.

Nothing erases your memory,
especially the one in my heart
I can still see your face
it's like fate didnt make us part.

I curse the day you left
and I thank God for the day we met
I wish I could have the latter
'cause I just cannot forget.

Sometimes, it just isn't worth it to chew through the restraints....

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-03-14 03:54 AM

I curse the day you left
and I thank God for the day we met

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I have been there and you wrote it so well.

Alison

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2008-03-14 05:17 AM

Tina it is debatable which takes the longest to heal. The heart or the mind. But heal they will & you must have faith and believe that, wishing you a speedy recovery John

K-K
Member

since 2008-03-13

Posts 153
Indiana

3 posted 2008-03-14 08:42 AM

Your words are powerful, reminds me of mine. Hope you find relief in your writing, if that's possible. Love the last lines

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

4 posted 2008-03-14 05:37 PM

Healing is process, and process embodies time. There is a depth within each of us where the healing waters flow. It's the courage to reach within that matters, and to give the wounded heart relief. Your poem touches me in a special way. I wish you well.

Art

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2008-03-15 12:01 PM

I feel this deeply

but you knew that

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