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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Have you a moment to forget ? Then read my poem, i called it Black Hole cause it devours anything the love that misses you, the idea of being alone, it devours your attention it devours the energy of your costly computer, it devours the nearest poems or any thoughts that cross over your mind but above all it devours the time you spent reading it, and somehow that's great. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (03-13-2008 07:40 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed, yann. I can't think of a better way to spend time either. By the way I think you English is steadily improving. Ida |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
I love being in my black hole, it is full of the good folks on here, welcome to the family Yann... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think this is really interesting. I'll be reading your other poems too -- it's nice to meet you here on the boards. Alison |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 that ending got me!I often think of Pip as the black poetry hole that swallowed much of my time these past few years. Yet here I am, sticking my toes into the hole again. LAUGH, it's a the black holes that make reality's 'light' tolerable! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
you're totally right midnitsun, thank you for the light you gave to the black hole... regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you Ida, John and alison for your kind comments... Yann |
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