Open Poetry #42 |
Casa Del Mar |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Casa Del Mar There is a place beside the sea Where in my heart I long to be A tiny casa sits alone With roof of straw and walls of stone A lovely girl is waiting there With smiling lips and flowing hair I see her in my dreams each night Dancing in the pale moonlight So dark and lovely, soft and tanned She waltzes ‘cross the golden sand And waits beside that casa fair For a love to dance beside her there So if one day you find me gone While days of stress go on and on You need but look beside the sea For that is where I’ll surely be Arm in arm with a lovely girl As all across the sands we twirl Dancing there beneath a star Beside that tiny casa del mar |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Stephen, You are such a romantic. This is beautiful and when it all gets too much - I hope you find your Casa Del Mar. With one stipulation, you keep posting your poetry. You made my heart smile. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Stephen... this is just magical! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such sweet dreams, very beautifully expressed. It's nice to find the balance in our every day life with some dreamy "excursion" into a lovely casa del mar. Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steven~ There is beautiful magic dancing in your ink~ I ADORE this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sweet and lovely! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Steve, may you manifest your incredibly romantic dreams into reality! Ooo, that was sooo lovely! Linda |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thank you all for the comments. I've got the girl, now all I need is that casa del mar. Oklahoma is a long way from the sea. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Hey Steve, She have a sister? If so, Su Casa Mi Casa?? Good job, much enjoyed... John |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Okay, I'm a fan. Ida |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've been gone awhile, Steve. It's good to see once again the soft romance that you bring to our table. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
I really like you poems, you have a sesitive side that shows |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Beautiful and ballad like,with a classical, romantic flavor. Every soul needs a Shangri-La to steal away from the stresses of the mundane days. Art |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Do you have a brother? |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Steve, This is not too bad, and it's well written. What a lucky girl, and lucky guy. Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes it is a really lovely poem Steve, Romantic and sweet, good luck my friend. Lindsay |
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