Open Poetry #42 |
Dizzy! |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
In this nasty weather everything comes inside and seesaws the mind between the real/unreal until dizzy is a woman from the up and down. It’s that togetherness at the peak of ecstasy that plummets to the depths with a shudder and a thud when the soul well and done with the spell of love. And so of spells who can undo what’s cast and made to be except the silence of a mind that allows me opportunities to disengage and walk away? Oh, but the dizziness is real and the end leads me back again straight to the beginning where the up and down engages strong locks to the outside. Trapped in love; tra-la, la-la, and no one hears the music! Helen / 31 January 2008 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Impressive, dear Helen! Another deep write to enjoy ... ... and believe me the music is heard by those who look into your eyes! love and joy Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hugs Helen, I understood the see saw, and the spell. You wrote this masterfully. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Yes, Margherita is totally right! A very much Enjoyed Deep write ARCTIC WIND |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks Margherita and TD. I do still think that one of the blessings in life is for someone to "understand". |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks Arctic Wind - so glad you enjoyed. One can drown in deep water, ya know, but I guess I'm meant to be around for a bit still. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dizziness is just how it feels for sure good write! Gosh I do love reading you! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Trapped in love; tra-la, la-la, and no one hears the music!" ~ I understand how that kind of "dizziness" is VERY "real". At times, one needs to be a circus performer to be able to manage the balancing act required, in a love relationship. Loving hug, Linda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi Dixie and thank you so much. Thank you Linda - earth angel's know a thing or two, you know. Hugs Helen |
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