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Open Poetry #42

Gently, Charter Cruise

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-03-11 10:03 PM

Gently, Charter Cruise

My mind slips fleetly as a zip line cast into the wake
Sensing every molecule between us, on intuitions take
Listening attentively, for sound or stir, my body still
Famished for the traded hours, my eager heart to fill
Words tumble, rolling curvature ‘neath frosted opal waves
Images and wishes blend, oared on by faithful staves
So pierce the sea at ambient depths
Salted water exhaled, moist its breaths,
Begin the rains, begin the rains
Contemplating finger-tipped emotions: roll the oceans
Clarity of touch that sings it’s longing to the North Star
Radiating where you are in navigations bold
Oh, you are the muscle and the might I hold
Guiding glide through storms and silence
No man could make me faithful, though I am full
Nor can you make the rain, or cast the shadows lull
But deeply, do I see the turquoise blue, the power due
As water, as life, emotions absolutely true
So fervently, in thinking as I do
How much of me, pours lovingly of you

Copyright Kkh 3/11/08

matronmedusa
Member

since 2008-03-08

Posts 89
Alabama, USA

1 posted 2008-03-11 10:55 PM

This is beautiful! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2008-03-11 11:59 PM

there is a neat message of how much to give in to manly controls that shines through

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-12-2008 12:00 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-03-12 07:49 AM

quote:
Contemplating finger-tipped emotions: roll the oceans
Clarity of touch that sings its longing to the North Star

Always you offer exquisite words and emotions, dear TD!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-03-12 09:49 AM

You write such Beautiful pieces..

ARCTIC WIND

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-03-12 04:29 PM

TD, I love so many parts of this, Individually this is stunning, collectively 'tis awesome....Damned fine write my friend, well done

John

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