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Open Poetry #42

When a heart aches

Talyn
Junior Member

since 2008-03-09

Posts 47
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2008-03-10 03:42 PM

For this I went to Dictionary.com and looked up the synonyms for 'missing' then filled in my feelings.

Main Entry: missing

Definition: absent
Synonyms:

The pain you leave me with when your away,

those Tears I cry are not gone, its everyday now.

You disappeared,

with me feeling left behind,

Im lacking your presence,

I feel lost.

How misplaced I feel,

Your not present.

Like you've omitted from my life,

but never removed from my heart.

Your unaccounted for in my everyday life,

with me left here wanting your love.

Talyn

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

1 posted 2008-03-10 03:45 PM

Talyn, this is sad, I hope you feel better soon, BTW welcome to Passions, I forgot to say that in your other post...John

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-03-10 03:46 PM

"You're" unaccounted for in my everyday life.
You are not the only poet here who makes this mistake. It is quite common I notice. Welcome to the site, Talyn. (pretty name)
Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (03-11-2008 01:14 AM).]

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