Open Poetry #42 |
Evening Soiree |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Smiles are brought when you talk risqué and ask would I attend your private soiree? With subtle laughter in pondered seconds I then answer I think that I could do that with you most certainly yes that I want to, too When you whisper softly in my ear I'm left with shivers at the mere glance of steel from eyes so keen deep into pools of emerald green And when I ask what should I wear? Your only answer is that stare daring me wear black on pale covered lightly with lacey veils so we can walk along the quay then after we've supped on spread of buffet and we've had our fill of a most delicious feast desert awaits to be our final treat. {revised 03-15-08} |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow! Donna, I love it! It's dynamic and fits your charms perfectly. To such a soirée who wouldn't want to say yes! Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed your words Donna... M |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Gentle Spirit, The rhymes in this work well. I like your use of the word "quay". Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An "Evening Soiree" to remember! ~ and may you have your 'just desserts'! A deliciously tantalizing way to end a perfect evening! Beautifully penned! I really enjoyed myself! Oh, shucks. You described the soiree so vividly that for a moment I actually thought that I was experiencing it! Linda |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna - Oh, Donna I love this. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to you each of you, my friends. You are all so appreciated. Hugs. |
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