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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2008-03-09 02:56 PM

Sometimes my mind tiptoes
to the edge rational thought
and peers out
into the mysterious universe,
I lean dangerously forward
in search of light,
If I should lose my balance
and topple over the edge,
will I fall forever?

Ida Werrett

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (03-10-2008 12:45 AM).]

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2008-03-09 02:59 PM

float forever ... in weightless wonder! ...

fine 'write!' of cosmological consequence!

applause!!

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2008-03-09 03:02 PM

Certainly not Ida, I would catch you, we would miss your posts too much to let you go.... John xx

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2008-03-09 04:23 PM

Let's FALL together! I, for one, prefer the visual image of exploring the depths of the universe to plunking myself down in front of a TV screen!

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

4 posted 2008-03-09 04:24 PM

What's a TV screen????

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-03-09 07:15 PM

I love the thought you express here, dear Ida. There is much darkness out there, but every now and then while floating in spirit you will touch upon the light, just to discover that where it shines really bright, is within your own heart.

Enjoyed this greatly.

Love.
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2008-03-09 07:56 PM

Thank you all for your responses.
Bruce, A nod from "The Poet" is most appreciated.
John, Thank you, keep your ears open, I'm very nosy and getting closer to the edge.I always appreciate your comments and that wicked charm.
Kacy, If I'm going to fall off the edge, I couldn't be in better company.
Margharita, I value your comments always, you are such a talented lady.
Ida

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2008-03-10 12:30 PM

I just keep thinking that it would be such a beautiful place to fall into.

But, if you went without me, Ida, I am like John -- I'd miss you.

A

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2008-03-10 12:42 PM

Ida,

This is pretty good. I'd cahnget the line:

"up to the edge rational thought"

to:

"to the edge of rational thought"

That would be loads better for me.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2008-03-10 12:46 PM

Just for you, Bobby. Thanks, I think you're right.
Ida

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2008-03-10 12:49 PM

Thank you, Alison, Maybe I would eventually fall into PIP land.
Ida

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2008-03-10 08:21 AM

Ida, good thought-provoking write here! I love it!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2008-03-10 11:10 AM

Dear Ida, all the previous replies reflect my sentiments as well! So I am replying by way of a bunch of dittos! ... ... ... ... ...

Loving hug,
Linda

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

13 posted 2008-03-10 11:22 AM

Beautiful, poem of grand view. Just don't be too close to a BLACK-HOLE

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