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Just My Luck
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Just My Luck |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
If I was driving in my convertible The top would not go up I'd get stuck in traffic Behind a chicken truck. If I won a million dollars This would be the plan They'd get me for back taxes It would go to Uncle Sam If I bought some property, Like a cemetary People would quit dying Nobody left to bury. If feces became valuable, There's something you could bet on, I'd be the only person Born without a rectum. If I entered a poetry contest, It would be my luck I fear, The judging of the contest Would be by Balladeer. |
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Balladino Junior Member
since 2008-03-06
Posts 18Prehistorical |
Toe, you wrote a perfect un-rhyme, un-poetic, un-formed un-free style, the funnest, thought provoking 20L(s)in fairly straight manner. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I think you summed it up perfectly..I think? |
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Balladino Junior Member
since 2008-03-06
Posts 18Prehistorical |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, I think your posts should come with a warning. *********************** *********************** WARNING This poem will make whatever you are drinking spew out of your nose! WARNING *********************** *********************** Too bad it is too late for me. Maybe you can use the subject in a poem. It sure as heck hurts. Thanks. A |
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