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In my Father's Image
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In my Father's Image |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
In my Father’s Image I fear the darkness of the evening’s smile Because I know it will be the final kiss When ancient debts and promises are bled Into the eyes and mouths of wingless Angels Then projected into the dreams of those real Angels As silver crucifixes crying auburn tears Originally regurgitated from the worm’s belly Born within the core of the first apple A gift from the procreator To whom I owe This sinful, Most times loving, Unspectacular, And still unpolished, Faithful soul. Marcel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Night is when thoughts are freed to dalliance. Sometimes lingering too intently...where we come from reflects that which we were born to...not who we are...and not who we were born to be. Nice to read you again Keith. |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Marcel, I like this. The words work well for you. Bobby |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
unpolished is good  love this look on you Keith well done  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes... beautiful... thank you RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is truly a work of art. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is some nice Writing much Enjoyed..... ARCTIC WIND |
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