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Open Poetry #42

Winter Moon

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-01-30 08:06 PM

     Winter Moon

This star-resplendent
  night
sings with the cold-clear
peal of frosted bells
resounding from
these ancient hills,
(where shades dance
  with the shadows)
beneath a quintescent
Winter moon…
the finest cynosure
of Nature’s equanimity
and incandescent
  truths!

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-01-30 08:27 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

This is good writing. It made my mind snap automatically to a little town in Pennsylvania named "Shades of Death". It’s in a section known as shade valley. The area is known for its Hemlock trees.

You most likely remember Socrates.

Bobby

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

2 posted 2008-01-30 08:50 PM

Bobby, you really make me laugh out loud. And you're right, this is good writing here.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-01-30 10:07 PM

very well written SHDP

ARCTIC WIND

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2008-01-31 08:48 AM

A winter moon illuminates all in bright and perfect intonation.
I could see it.

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

5 posted 2008-01-31 04:57 PM

I wonder why
The eye of night
sees more beauty

Always love your poem.
Tomtoo

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