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Break me |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Break me Am I so selfish? Is it wrong to want to love one man? Is this why I keep getting hurt? Am I really going to be all alone? How many times should I tell you I'm only lonely when I am in love Because everyone wants a part of me... When I am alone I am never alone -Juju |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like you need a good cowboy...James |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
lol -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Juju, I am intrigued by the line: “When I am alone I am never alone” I know that feeling. The world is full of ghosts of things past. You just think you’re alone. Nice work on this intriguing piece. Bobby |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Good thought. Nice poem. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you -Juju |
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