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Open Poetry #42

Forever. Yours.

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2008-03-16 06:39 AM

This lonely day has turned into night,
I feel my heart explode in my chest.
One bitter tear sparks in my eye,
The soul behind it knows no rest.
The light of one more candle is gone,
Reality is scaring my hope,
And through the night I'll be all alone...
But I will keep the promise. I'll cope.

The night. The day.
The miles. Away.
The waiting. Hard.
So frail. Apart.
The dusk. The dawn.
Afraid. Uknown.
Still lost. No way.
Alone. Again.

But everything we're going through
Is bound to leave a mark on my heart.
This mark will bind our lives, me and you.
Tomorrow will be a new start.
I'll shield you from the sword of your fate,
And, bleeding, I will fight for you, still.
The one it took you long to create
Will heal you by one movement of will.

Your eyes. The light.
Arms broken. Fight.
My heart. My hand.
Love. Till the end.
The promise. Here.
With you. No fear.
New ways. New doors.
Forever. Yours.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-16 05:57 PM

There is a great rhythm in this one, enjoyed it.

Love,
Margherita

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-03-16 06:26 PM

great poem!
midnightdreamer

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2008-03-16 08:51 PM

Beautiful Disaster, that is one great poem

You told it well.

Lindsay

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