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World Peace |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA 
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World Peace To feel happy Is all you will ever need To go on in life And never experience greed The dark moments we have Are parts of the circle of life But be careful to never use That weapon you call a knife You want to have more good than bad Moments that you can share With your family, friends, or just whoever To show that you really do care Be happy, world Is that a difficult task? I would very much hope not World peace is all I ask |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
World peace is a good thought to have, but to my sadness a lot of people don't see the world the same way as you do -_-''. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
This is very good, I enjoyed it a lot...Having an 11 year old I wish it could come true, not in my life time I think ( or even hers) we can only live in hope....BTW, I once heard that WAR stood for We Are Right..sums it up really.... |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
Thank you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A wonderful thought, a fine dream to believe in and WORK for, because it won't happen unless we MAKE it happen. Thank you. I'm with you on this one. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
A wonderful poem. very good. |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
That's exactly what I think. Some people just might not care though. That's the really sad part. Thank you for your kind comments. |
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