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Open Poetry #42

on a kinder note

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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0 posted 2008-03-06 08:24 AM

on a kinder note:
I love all that is you

remember
time fancies no one
but you are more handsome
than I ever knew

I have enjoyed us
and that I will miss
of laughter and warmth
of forbidden kiss
even up in years
I remember this
while moving forward
I reminisce
and tuck that note
into your pocket
while you're sleeping-
before I leave
a secret worth keeping

just between you, me,
and your winter coat...

"I love you. Goodbye."
on a kinder note

KeyLimeSorbet
Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 74
Colorado

1 posted 2008-03-06 08:46 AM

"remember
time fancies no one
but you are more handsome
than I ever knew"

Wow!, the biggining and end to this poem really knocked me off my feet! thayre amazing, this part right here is going to be stuck in my head all day!
Wonderful, many kudos

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2008-03-06 08:53 AM

"while moving forward
I reminisce"

~ Yes, your shadows are passing as you are moving forward with your life. Reminiscing can be so bittersweet, can it not?

Loving hug,
Linda

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-03-06 11:35 AM

nice writing.
Ida

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