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My Soul Complete (Triolet)
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My Soul Complete (Triolet) |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
“My Soul Complete” (Triolet) With Her I feel my soul complete. She fills my heart with song and love. The air I breathe and life is sweet. With Her I feel my soul complete. She’s by my side, there’s no defeat. Swear by the moon and stars above. With Her I feel my soul complete. She fills my heart with song and love. MoonShadow . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Mr. Moon, Completeness is one soul split into two halves, finding the other to become whole once more! after admiring your fine display of affection, I feel complete... RH..Milly |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is the only kind of love that love should ever be gentle Kenneth. Nicely done sir moonshadow. after a fall I get back up, |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
sweet... and makes one long to have his soul complete Thank you for sharing |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
enjoyed. Tomtoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
MS, I would wager my proverbial wings, that any woman loved by a man who writes words such as these, would surely have a heart filled with song and would feel that her soul is complete as well.   EA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Sir MoonShadow I would have to agree with Linda Angel |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
James... Thank you for the read. Milly... I believe Love is 'one soul inhabiting two bodies' but the gist is the same, Yes? Glad you catch the feeling. Thank you for the wonderful graphics. Perhaps one day I'll learn how to add them too. MoonShadow . |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Donna... For me it is the only kind. Thank you for your sweet words. My Enchanted Melody... You are welcome. Thank you for the read. MoonShadow . |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Tom... Thanks for the read. Glad you enjoyed. Linda... I would never bet against an Angel.. and I wish it so with all my heart. Milady Kate... I am please you agree. Thank you for your sweet response. MoonShadow . |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
MoonShadow, Two souls as one...a bridge that connects two hearts. Well done. CG |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Lovely words Moonshadow, I read it and reread it, great poem. LindsayP |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Nice triolet! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
CastleGuard... So true. Thank you for the read. Lindsay... Thank you for your kind response. MoonShadow . |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Iliana... Thank you for the read and response. MoonShadow . |
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