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Open Poetry #41

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James McInerney
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since 2003-09-27

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0 posted 2007-08-30 07:51 PM

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Are you my sanctuary here?
All my hopes,
My desires,
So scared that I could surrender myself,
If I thought you'd reply,
The whole of my heart,
For one piece of your sky,
In this place that I dwell,
Amongst the tears that I've cried.
Please don't tell me you love me,
As you whisper goodbye,
For tonight I'm in heaven,
Beneath the stars,
I reside.

(Inspired by the music 'Diary of hate' by Michael Nyman)

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-08-31 11:57 AM

James, this is sadly beautiful.

Thank you!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-08-31 12:51 PM

Enjoy the moment! ~ Live in the now!

Seize the day! ~ and the night!

Love & Light,
EA

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-09-01 07:16 AM

Enjoyed reading this...James

Kit McCallum

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4 posted 2007-09-01 07:44 AM

There is a lovely, soft and tender quality to this piece, James. Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2007-09-01 03:08 PM

Very emotional write, with such beautiful music, I hope my voice , my emotion, lives up to your talent!

Looking forward to reading more of your lovely work!

James McInerney
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 83

6 posted 2007-09-01 04:19 PM

Many thanks for the comments.
Millette..I look forward to hear what you come up with.

James

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