Open Poetry #41 |
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Will You Marry Me? |
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PoloniusFicklebottom Junior Member
since 2007-06-27
Posts 17 |
Will you marry me? baby, will you marry me? The time is right, I'm asking tonight, if you would share your life with mine. -So, will you marry me? baby, will you marry me? I'm down on one knee, with this ring you see, this one question needs your answer so please... For you, my sweet lady, I would gladly get down on one knee. If I hear a "no" from you, then be sure I will get down on two. So please, don't deny what I feel, I'm out of knees on which to kneel. I only ask that you grant me, this wish to be King for a Queen. Will you marry me? baby, will you marry me? The time is right, I'm asking tonight, as the love of my life, baby, would you be my wife? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZ7amBkTDNM |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
if not have her read that she should change her mind fast afterwards I am the little cracked mirror |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Polonius, methinks thy bottom be not so fickle! "I only ask that you grant me, this wish to be King for a Queen." ~ If I be she, so mote it be! lol ![]() EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fear not...as time goes by she will bring up the subject if she so desires...James |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Really enjoyed this poem, thank you for sharing ![]() |
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sweetbomb Junior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 48Canada |
How old are you and how old is she? How long have you been together, do you live together? Do you mind if she has a life of her own? Does she mind if you have one of your own? Are you thinking or is it lust? Do you like her? Do you think you will like her when she is 45? Will she like you when you are 45? D |
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PoloniusFicklebottom Junior Member
since 2007-06-27
Posts 17 |
haha, thank you all for the concern and pointers. it's just a poem, there is no proposal. -although i do hope to experience the wonders of marraige someday! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZ7amBkTDNM will you marry me?^ |
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