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ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
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0 posted 2007-08-30 08:31 AM


Slowly creeping off to sleep,
my breathing slows.

Sound is replaced with floating,
and the mind is free.

Amazing what comes,
thoughts, moments, pictures.

Awaken by a deep pitted feeling,
just need a moment to gather myself.

Flowers, Song, Tears and Screams,
which will come to me tonight?

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-08-30 11:44 AM


Yes, they will come those dreams of either nature ... if it's true that our dreams reflect our expectations and our psyche, we just need to be ready to cope with everything, unless we know how to create peace within just before closing our eyes and dripping off to dreamland.

It's difficult to remain totally fearless ... so some nightmares are really tough, I know.

Nice job.

Love,
Margherita

cokeiq
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since 2007-08-24
Posts 27

2 posted 2007-08-30 01:05 PM


Nightmares haunt of ghostly ephemeral figures clutching a heart still beating,
spirits groan of life that once was theirs to breathe ... ... now forever gone
Torment those that still hold glowing light
Drink poison, sigh slowly
fall and rest.

Yep, I do not like bad dreams!

PoloniusFicklebottom
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since 2007-06-27
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3 posted 2007-08-30 01:16 PM


i like this.
it goes from fear to anticipation.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZ7amBkTDNM
^will
you marry me?^


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www.myspace.com/poloniusficklebottom

ladylisa
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4 posted 2007-08-31 03:12 PM


Thank you all for your responses.  Dreams are amazing things.  
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