Open Poetry #41 |
Come |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Come to me, my love, I will love you, No matter what? Let us breathe once again, here comes the rain, Where the love lies upon our heart, Come to me, My love, Life takes you far away, to the dreams you see, To the love we make, Daily, where we pray, Where ray of sunshines show, at the sky, Come to me, My love, Don't shy away, From me, Don't be afraid, To fall in love with me, Come to me, Come to me, My love, Come to my life, This is my life, Come to me, My love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very beautiful invitation, dear vandana! There is a nice musical rhythm in this. Love, Margherita |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
very nice, enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms van, you dance as a woman here..enjoyed it |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vandana, this is Beautiful! |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Very moving! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very very nicely done, Vandana. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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