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Questing Spirit
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Questing Spirit |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Rising with the morning sun my questing spirit soars, hungry and keen sighted as an eagle circling the dawn. Here I enter a light dream, walking weightless on soft moss edging a greening meadow and a gentle wind propels my spirit to seek a new path of wisdom. Here I taste of rejuvenation to prolong my body's journey, exchanging pain and sorrow for joy outside of words.. Here, I celebrate the passing of man's ancient night and an aurora of light flowing with ecstasy awakens the vision within. Here, I experience fully the dawning of a new world so long inaccessible within hidden dimensions. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Simply grand! I am especially fond of: “Rising with the morning sun my questing spirit soars, hungry and keen sighted as an eagle circling the dawn(!)” Most serious and long-sustained applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"walking weightless on soft moss" oh, this is a fine way to greet dawn |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Mystically magnificent. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"walking weightless on soft moss edging a greening meadow" delightful WindWalker |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh WOW!  You have outdone yourself with this wise wonder. Nicely done.  |
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teddymarvelle Junior Member
since 2007-08-26
Posts 47california usa |
i can tough taste smell and feel this environment of natue ... very nicely done |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Reading your poetry is always a joy, WindWalker. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
WW, your spiritual poems are among the best that I have ever read. Each one touches my soul and makes we want to fly! ~ with the wings of an eagle (angel wings aren't as aerodynamic!  )As the vision awakens within you, you show your readers "the dawning of a new world". Love & Dawning Light, EA  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I was most happy to find this grand-fine 'write' back near the top of the 'P.I.P.-land' queue once again! continuing major applause!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You write with vigor and hope. So many striking lines, and I especially loved this one... ..."Here I taste of rejuvenation to prolong my body's journey, exchanging pain and sorrow for joy outside of words.."... Awesome! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
one more encore! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Each and every line resonates. Wonder full! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Very well written Wind Walker so much enjoyed Lindsay |
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