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Indomitable |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I watch you grow each day, embracing a world sometimes cold lacking in luster of gleam and shine clawing and scratching white washed surfaces coated with the hypocrisy of faces contorted those knowing not heart..... It is only greed they suffer from, endowing themselves in lies fulfilling a need for their next fix obtaining a thrill inflicting their will; upon the weak upon the meek and you... regard not what the world throws your way... come what may I watch you grow each day stronger, indomitable the will to survive. after a fall I get back up, move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice! JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Strong Write, Donna. MoonShadow . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank ya'll so very much.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~reflective writes can help one heal~ |
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cokeiq Junior Member
since 2007-08-24
Posts 27 |
Bullies in forms undistinguishable cheat and label, lying subtle feel coarse liquid pouring down swallow bitter gall. Damn it all, bereft of solemn promises fading away rapid gone like the clouds, away from tainted smiles of hidden daggers firm handshake, another trap hypocrites all, drowning Yes ... ... seen them all |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
powerful write gentle Donna hugs |
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teddymarvelle Junior Member
since 2007-08-26
Posts 47california usa |
youre very good ..an amazing soul.. in one of my poems i wrote: like circus folk behind thier booth a yellow grin of snagled tooth round and round she goes when will she stop nobody knows..... for some reason this write of yours made me think of that.. i love your work |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So much power in your writing - and you write so well. Often, Donna, you reach in and touch me deep inside. Thank you. Alison |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow. I agree, this is powerful, Donna. I also enjoyed the format and flow in this with the sequential rhymes centred part way through. Nicely done, much enjoyed this. PS. I like your dog in your picture too!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I smile when I read your replies and thank you each for in them I am blessed. This is a personal favorite to me because it was originally written as I observed my daughter becoming a strong individual (tho' sometimes stubborn) and that was the word that popped into my head and this was the outcome of that thought. Thank you, each. I am thankful for the touch here. Ya'll are just great. after a fall I get back up, |
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