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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-08-27 07:17 AM



“So Filled With Love”
(Terzanelle)

So filled with love I gave my heart to Thee.
I pledged my soul forever without end.
So filled with love I gave my heart to Thee.

All through eternity our love would blend
to weave our souls together into one.
I pledged my soul forever without end.

In lovely dance the moon, the stars and sun,
the music played in perfect harmony
to weave our souls together into one.

A beautiful love waltz of ecstasy
of loving soulmates, two joined at the heart.
The music played in perfect harmony.

A sensual sweet tapestry of art,
such beauty there for lovers ever more
of loving soulmates, two joined at the heart

For never was my love so bold before.
So filled with love I gave my heart to Thee.
Such beauty there for lovers ever more.
So filled with love I gave my heart to Thee.

MoonShadow
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© Copyright 2007 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-08-27 07:37 AM


Very lovely! Though I have no confidence with this form, I see you did a beautiful job.

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2007-08-27 07:47 AM


There is something magical about a waltz underneath the moonlight, very romantic,
I love romantic dances, especially with the one soulmate that fate and destiny has brought into your life.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2007-08-27 03:19 PM




exquisite
and filled with love
gentle Sir MoonShadow

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-08-27 03:45 PM


Enjoyed...James
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
5 posted 2007-08-27 03:52 PM


you gave your heart to thee
forever and a day
may he feel it

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
6 posted 2007-08-27 05:52 PM


You inspire me to try this form
It works, it really works, when you stick to the form and write as beautifully as you do.
How lovely this is!
Bravo!
Liz

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
7 posted 2007-08-28 07:18 AM


Margherita... The form was with me on this one, yes. Thank you.

R.H.... Yes, Love is the magic ingredient.

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
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Dark side of the Moon.
8 posted 2007-08-28 07:19 AM



  Milady Kate.. Yes. Filled to overflowing
       and enough to share a lifetime.

         MoonShadow
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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
9 posted 2007-08-28 07:21 AM


James... Thank you for the read.

Inkgoddess... May "She" feel it.

Liz... Thank you for your kind words.
     May the Form be with you.

         MoonShadow
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
10 posted 2007-08-29 05:42 PM


Excuse me, for I am still chuckling over your remark to Liz ~ "May the Form be with you"

Well now, I know what Terrazzo flooring is ~ now I know what a Terzanelle is! Thank you!

Exquisitely written, Sir Romancio!

May the Form be with you, as well!


Linda

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2007-08-29 05:43 PM


Goodness! I'd forget my 'wings' if they weren't attached!

... SAVED

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
12 posted 2007-08-30 07:15 AM


Linda... Your chuckle sounded like little bells... must be the Angel in you. Thank you for such a sweet response.

         MoonShadow
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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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13 posted 2007-08-30 08:48 AM


Reading this whilst sippin my coffee slow....and all I can do is sigh.........How lovely this is.
MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
14 posted 2007-08-31 12:10 PM


Donna... a good cuppa coffee and a sweet sigh...
   My kinda mornin'.
     Thank you for the kind words.

       MoonShadow
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