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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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I'm waiting for the fall of eve the darkness, full and thick upon the surroundings, peaceful, quiet, in the absence of you. I wait for the dense air of night black of all that is the remove of noise, to miss, you, in the mid of thought. You my love, who touched... who left me with a kiss, on lips, heat on fingertips, my passion now alive... missing you, and I am awash with the warmth of Summer yet undone in the lack of you. Rose [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-26-2007 07:55 AM).] |
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PanFiction Junior Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 11 |
That was nice, I really liked it. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most pleasant romanticism! applause! very nice choice of 'P.I.P.' UserName (ID) also, by the way! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
secondhanddreampoet, I've had it for a long time. It's been my online name for so long I feels it's more me than my real name. Thanks so much for commenting. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ymmm...James |
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