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Open Poetry #41

Awaiting Autumn

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-08-24 04:34 PM

This is where you and I begin,
the favorite of all seasons,
colors to invigorate the mind,

Senses stirred, aroused,
beauty in nature,
surrounded by covers,

Of beautiful colors,
mixtures of memories,
painted on our hearts,

Glorious feelings of love,
happiness awaits
as we walk together,

Through autumns season,
Old leaves die,
bringing new beauty,

Where new memories,
are born, free to float,
and land where they may.

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (08-24-2007 07:08 PM).]

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-08-24 04:40 PM

I absolutely LOVE the ending to this 'write'!:

"Where new memories,
are born, free to float,
and land where they may(!)"

[sadly, it is all-to-often in the wasteland of
lost love]

Applause!!

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2007-08-24 06:42 PM

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A good poem

John

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TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2007-08-25 02:55 AM

very beautiful...a jewel

enjoyed the read

Tomtoo

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