Open Poetry #41 |
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Any Day |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Any Day I can write of you and when ink has left my pen I am still so alone your echo stirs as satin ribbons that I rub between my fingers I follow you timed steps behind effortlessly you walk the sand and all I find are remnants of you shells strewn upon a restless shore I gather up the fragile kitten prints holding them closely to my heart why do I miss you every day "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It cuts deep it does Helen..feeling this one. Hugs sweetie. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Deep feelings here. Emotional write and beautiful, beautiful love the read. Tomtoo |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Love and longing so beautifully expressed Hope |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"your echo stirs as satin ribbons that I rub between my fingers" such lovely pain here Helen |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Heartfelt - this is so beautiful. A |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Helen, I have asked myself that same question. To this day, I don't know the answer. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
1Slick, your poem tugs at my heart profoundly. Thanx for sharing and hugs2u PoetFriend. *~coco~* |
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