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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2007-08-24 04:57 AM

The call is growing silent
as the love becomes distant,
as space engulfs the empty
that your leaving left behind.

The light of passion dims,
the heated rush is waning,
soon the longing, once incessant
will fade, and simply die.
Rose 07

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-25-2007 11:46 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-08-24 08:02 AM

You transmit the melancholy so well!

You speak a truth that many can sadly relate to!

Love,
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2007-08-24 08:28 AM

Ah, Rosie... It's so good to see your work here again!! *S*

as space engulfs the empty
that your leaving left behind.

How beautifully you've described this ache... this hollowness. Excellent write!

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

3 posted 2007-08-24 03:10 PM

   Anne... the imagery is vivid and the
             ambiance is sad...
              yet the flicker of embers
                 still illuminate hope.

                  MoonShadow
.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2007-08-24 03:24 PM

Thanks so much, everyone, for the comments and the warm welcome back.

cokeiq
Junior Member

since 2007-08-24

Posts 27

5 posted 2007-08-24 06:03 PM

Everything fades and dies with the passing of time. Eloquent capture of the scenario!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-08-24 09:44 PM

Dear Rose of White, I was thinking of you just the other day ~ and voila! ~ you're back!

"as space engulfs the empty
that your leaving left behind."

~ I've been there, and you depict that emptiness very well with this melancholy write.

Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug,

EA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2007-08-24 09:59 PM

Welcome home, dear.
I hope things are going well
for you...
it is good to see you
writing again.

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2007-08-24 10:06 PM

heartfelt and honest write

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