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Open Poetry #41

Rhythms and Patterns

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-08-23 05:22 PM

     Rhythms and Patterns

Waves grasp the sky
(disturbing cloud reflections)
in the last light of the
  setting sun.

Delicious scents tap at
  evening-star windows.

Distant lightning flashes
bisect the winds of time.

The lake offers itself
  in sanctuary
to the rippling moonlight.

The night-mind untangles,
  free of all yearning.

Shadows trail the dawn,
  lingering nowhere.

Day flows to sunset,
revealing only...
  fixity of change!

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (08-23-2007 05:53 PM).]

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

1 posted 2007-08-23 05:33 PM

"the fixity of change"
Oh, well said! And the poem, beautiful.

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2007-08-23 05:43 PM

absolute beauty!!!!
how did you do it?!!!! and every one is so fine.

Tomtoo

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2007-08-24 07:42 AM

Exactly!!!!
You are the master at this minimalistic constructionalism form!
Another poem honoring the essence of Gaia

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2007-08-28 06:40 PM

This one is Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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