Open Poetry #41 |
False Bravado |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
False Bravado How sad that our love is overshadowed now, darkened by your leaving because I didn't know how, to grieve when you left, to let the tears flow, I loved you more than you'll ever know. I'm broken now shattered, destroyed, knowing in my heart that you'll be annoyed, at my pitiful attempt to let out some rage, spilling false bravado all over the page. Rose 07 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Anne it is good to read you again. Very powerful emotive write here. Welcome back. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of when my wife left me...and I took it badly, and she said she liked me better the other way...James |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very emotional write. beautiful Tomtoo |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This is truly poetic. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Heartfelt. MoonShadow . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very real and to the point liked this a lot |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, I believe that it is true that some of our "heroes" are truly annoyed at our reactions. But in the end we come to our senses and admit our own strength and are able to recover. Very good write. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Revisit...James |
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