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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-08-23 08:17 AM

Before you, I come,
standing, open,
pure, in heart,

dressed only,
with love,
wrapped tightly,

smooth, unending,
covered, love tattoos,
painted across,

soft ivory skin,
intoxicating the senses,
with the scent of vanilla,

I come as an offering,
my naked, bare heart,
layed out before you,

Awaiting your cloak,
of protective love,
to shelter,

To nuture, mend,
this fragile heart,
back to health.

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (08-25-2007 02:57 AM).]

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

1 posted 2007-08-23 09:17 AM

"I come as an offering,
my naked, bare heart,
layed out before you,"

Beautifully said.

MoonShadow
.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-08-23 11:40 AM

Very nice.

JL

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-08-24 02:24 PM

well penned!

and...I hope it really does exist 'out there' somewhere
(in this corporate wilderness that once was America)...that:

"...cloak,
of protective love,
to shelter,

To nurture, mend,
this fragile heart,
back to health."

applause!!

cokeiq
Junior Member

since 2007-08-24

Posts 27

4 posted 2007-08-24 04:19 PM

Transparent relationships of idealism, hopes of love untainted ... ... exquisite!

I learned in my earlier relationships though that love is not "hollywood" scenarios but a lot of hard work!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2007-08-24 04:28 PM

Enjoyed the read, Romantic Heart. My opinion is that when love is real it comes easily because there is no ego involved.

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

6 posted 2007-08-25 02:44 AM

beautiful,truly.

enjoyed

Tomtoo

Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

7 posted 2007-08-25 09:52 PM

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhh!
Now if I could just push my hand through this Braille display ... ... ...
Southern Cross

teddymarvelle
Junior Member

since 2007-08-26

Posts 47
california usa

8 posted 2007-08-28 02:20 AM

your words it seems go deeper than my skin
your thoughts and mine a kin
lol .. realy like your work.. thats all

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

9 posted 2007-08-28 02:27 AM

Nothing heals like LOVE...

Yet, love floats like a dream...

It's the relationship that's tough....LOL.

Loved the poem, ARH.

CG

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