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Open Poetry #41

but never met in kiss

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2007-08-23 12:09 PM

What fades
the growing season
departing now

the dreams of spring
eclipsed,
by sorrow's grasp

and fail
to resurrect
from sudden stirrings
born on whims
where two had longed

but never met

in kiss.

Bronzeage
Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 197

1 posted 2007-08-23 02:31 AM

Very nice write. I enjoyed this.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2007-08-23 06:14 AM

ms inky, there are always more moments

enjoyed you babe

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-08-23 06:52 AM

Nice...James

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2007-08-23 12:10 PM

well done. I felt the regret.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

5 posted 2007-08-23 01:50 PM

.

good

John

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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

6 posted 2007-08-23 02:03 PM

   Much regret felt from reading between the lines.
    A moment not seized disappears and
      regret is left to replace what
       might have been a beautiful memory.
               (sigh)

             MoonShadow
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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2007-08-24 07:38 AM

Very intense write, dear Michelle... and I feel with you.

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2007-08-25 08:06 PM

thank you kindly for reading me
always appreciated

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

9 posted 2007-08-26 06:47 PM

Most lovely.

Alison

teddymarvelle
Junior Member

since 2007-08-26

Posts 47
california usa

10 posted 2007-08-26 07:48 PM

nice read good form.. love it

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