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Open Poetry #41

I Love A Woman/Chapter1

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-08-22 07:33 AM

I Love A Woman/Chapter1

I love a woman
but she keeps
going away
and I don't
know what
to say
except I
miss her.

JamesLee
22August
2007

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-08-22 07:39 AM

Though you say you don't know what to say, you just expressed your feelings beautifully and a poem always reaches out and touches the heart of those who inspire us ...
looking forward to chapter II.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-08-23 06:46 AM

Thank you Margherita...I have a two and three and will post later after I text Chapter 1 to my sweetheart...I wonder what four will say...when the time comes...James

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

3 posted 2007-08-23 07:13 AM

If she 'keeps going away'... then she also 'keeps coming back'. In that is hope... keep faith and all is not lost.

MoonShadow
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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2007-08-23 08:04 AM

MoonShadow's right of course and missing makes the heart grow fonder.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-08-23 11:43 AM

Nice write.

JL

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-08-23 03:57 PM

Thank you Moon Shadow, honeybunch and JL for the nice responses...I appreciate them.
I have not lost hope, but find this kind of situation hard to live with emotionally...I am trying to find positive ways to accept this...I need to mature and to be more accepting...and through all of this I have seen how love can survive and grow even when two hearts are far apart...and close together...and far apart...and close together...and far apart...James

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-08-24 01:14 AM

your poem is beautiful James
your feelings, heartbreaking

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-08-26 04:38 PM

Thank you Lady for your kind words...James

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