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WindWalker
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0 posted 2007-08-20 07:25 PM


Dreams:
portals to the spirit world?
pathways to realities unseen?
Places unknown?
World’s forgotten
except in fairy tales?

Do they seek to impart wonder and awe
for what the mind conceives
in moments of rest,
far from the daily grind?

Some say dreams are make-believe,
to listen is a waste of time...
Some say dreams lead to spiritual wisdom,
the teachings of the sages of old.
It matters not, what some say:
dreams flow as rivers of colours,
creating moods, evoking emotions.

Dream a grizzly bear, a wise one
who beckons you to follow:
"Come, walk with me (he says)
through coastal wilderness
where giant firs cast their shadows,
harbouring a host of unseen life;
to jagged glaciers piercing clouds
where even the eagle dare not fly!
Feel the wind push away the clouds--
the body vibrating to new power: here,
the soul ascends pulled by its own thirst
for a greater knowing.
Here, you truly dream!

© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-08-20 07:43 PM


A grand-fine ‘write’!...
[as I have so come to expect from this author]

…I read this,
and I AM the eagle who shall dare
that dream flight!

I could easily ‘hi-lite’ this entire piece,
however, I  am especially fond of:

"Come, walk with me …
through coastal wilderness
where giant firs cast their shadows,
harbouring a host of unseen life;
to jagged glaciers piercing clouds
where even the eagle dare not fly!...

here,
the soul ascends pulled by its own thirst
for a greater knowing.”

VERY serious, long-sustained applause!!
                      ~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2007-08-20 07:49 PM


I felt myself walking through the Olympic peninsula, the forests of British Columbia, and of course, my old stomping grounds, Alaska.
Oh, your dream 'rivers of colours' got me!
Thank you for such a wondrous journey.
(And wise bears know what the woods are all about.)

LeeJ
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3 posted 2007-08-20 08:00 PM


harbouring a host of unseen life;
to jagged glaciers piercing clouds
where even the eagle dare not fly!
Feel the wind push away the clouds--
the body vibrating to new power: here,
the soul ascends pulled by its own thirst
for a greater knowing.
Here, you truly dream!


you have taken me to a marvelous place of wilderness...and there is such power in your words and  this place you so admirably write of...thank you

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2007-08-22 10:13 AM


back up to the top
with this gorgeous offering!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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5 posted 2007-12-31 02:10 PM


Most beautiful write, back to the top.
                               Ida

Clang
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6 posted 2007-12-31 03:20 PM


Beautiful.  I could see the images vibrantly.
secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2007-12-31 03:22 PM


I am most happy to see this superb 'write' brought back near the top of the 'P.I.P.-land' queue!

continuing (major) applause!!

ArtSolstice
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8 posted 2007-12-31 03:31 PM


Wow!  Thank you for returning this write to page 1 again. It's wonderful!
TomMark
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9 posted 2007-12-31 05:31 PM


always good poems. Love the read.

Happy New Year to You

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