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Open Poetry #41

As Early as September

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-08-19 05:02 PM

As Early as September

Somedays I feel strong
as a fishing line
even though I'm
not with you,
I know that
you are true.

On other days
I feel the ache of
you being far away
and like a fisherman
without a catch
I fold up my net
wishing I had the prize
and wondering how I'll
survive without you.

"Perhaps I'll see her
as early as September,
if not let it be in
October or November,
surely not as late
as December."

JamesLee
19August
2007

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2007-08-19 06:03 PM

beautiful always

enjoyed the read

Tomtoo

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2007-08-20 12:11 PM

I hope it is soon for you.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2007-08-20 01:44 AM

I'll hope for September for you! Like the comparison to the fishing line. *hugs*...jo

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2007-08-20 01:58 AM

There's something simple and Chinese
in this

Good

John

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2007-08-20 04:44 AM

James - put out the intent for September and don't ever think of December!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-08-20 04:14 PM

Thank you TomMark, Smart Chick, iliana, Huan and Honeybunch for the wonderful responses...James

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