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Eternal Flux
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Eternal Flux |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Eternal Flux Evening weaves… its luminous-twilight tapestry of sunset dreams…and stars… and moonlit fantasies above a fine forest canopy, as the soft, dark-wooded wonders of night settle the soul and tease the lonely mind. One tastes the seductive scent of ultimate ‘truth’… that the only real peace lies in final acceptance of infinite, eternal flux in the rhythms of Nature and time, where our finite fears and schemes matter not… to a new, awakening dawn, when the high clear moon sings his song of parting love to the rising morning star! ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Stunningly beautiful! Bruce, this is positively uplifting! Grin, though some may not agree, I am happy that nature is beyond our schemes... "that the only real peace lies in final acceptance of infinite, eternal flux in the rhythms of Nature and time, where our finite fears and schemes matter not…" (Time to sit within an agriglyph.) |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, This runs along well. Nice work. Bobby |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And this is a truth worth noting! Most enjoyable write as usual - thank you! |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
I always think of your poems as paintings because i can see everything so vividly. I enjoyed this, just as I have all the others. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bruce, I literally could quote each exquisite line as a favorite, in my response to this breath-taking piece of poetic expression! You put the P in Poet!   Linda |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This is just... oh, this just takes my breath away. Very fine, Poet! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
like the soft feathery dreamy cloud, it flies to me, then flies away and left a image in my mind. beautiful Tomtoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ *sigh* ... romantically write the moon, stars and twilight and you've got my rapt attention~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona |
fantastic! my favorite! warrior undefeated |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WONDERFUL POEM ARCTIC WIND |
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