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Open Poetry #41

Spit Out The Pits

sweetbomb
Junior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 48
Canada

0 posted 2007-08-17 09:18 PM

Spit Out The Pits

Out of touch with your soul
You were at your best
When you peeled back the layers
Bared your teeth
Sank them into bittersweet flesh
Sucked the juices dry
And spit out the pits.

De Anna Lane Aston

copyright 2007

[This message has been edited by sweetbomb (08-18-2007 03:08 PM).]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-08-18 04:29 AM

I really liked this poem.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

sweetbomb
Junior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 48
Canada

2 posted 2007-08-18 05:47 AM

Thank you. D

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-08-18 07:05 AM

Nice...James

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