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Open Poetry #41

statement of deeds

kasey191
Junior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 33
Australia

0 posted 2007-08-17 02:19 AM

Love nothing
not even these words
that you twist and distort
for your sadistic cause
i believe in the truth
you really are worthless
the lies you told
to save your soul
have no substance here
we are left with the lies
you deemed me unworthy
and i broke down your walls
just to find nothing lived
it was burned years ago
just this empty place
we must leave for now
to never return
i hope for the day
our ghosts leave this place
and i pray for the sorrow
to fall from your face
but time is an angel
never showing her cause
and our souls were lost
as our hearts were burned
leaving a shell
no one can resist

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

1 posted 2007-08-17 12:06 PM

This was very nice Kasey.
Can't compliment you enough on this one.

Garfield

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

2 posted 2007-08-17 12:30 PM

HMMM sounds like a familiar tune to me....I've been there but do we ever really get through it???

~~~kingsangel~~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-08-17 05:12 PM

Nice writing...James

kasey191
Junior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 33
Australia

4 posted 2007-08-18 09:14 AM

thank you

i promise to read more poems on here once i get home

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