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carolinabeen
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since 2006-12-12
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0 posted 2007-07-17 06:39 AM



-slap snappy-

there was a rotten chain left behind tonight
one single blame and stigma the fight
there was one left rotten chain tonight
two games and not much left to slight
there was two left chains rotting tonight
three names and one less to bite
there was a rotten chain left behind tonight
one man, one woman
the third left to fight

J.L. Koehler


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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-07-17 10:15 AM


interesting poem and end nicely
enjoyed

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