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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2007-08-15 01:49 PM




a gift awaits
before the eyes
in mystery cloaked
tied with neat ties

the mind ponders
with curious joy
the secret within
with mind to toy

the knotted streams
tied into bows
arranged precisely
one to next flows

and the mind follows
what the eyes take
each loop undone
raises the stake

and when at last
close to revelation
about to dispel
all speculation

there within beckons
as a mischievous ghost
yet once again
another host...


CG

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-08-15 01:51 PM


Much enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme of this.  Nicely penned.
catgirl789
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since 2007-08-15
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2 posted 2007-08-15 02:44 PM


This poem is nice and I loved that it rhymed.
CastleGuard
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3 posted 2007-08-15 05:42 PM



Thank you, had fun writing it.

CG

bel1e
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4 posted 2007-08-15 06:58 PM


~what a curious poem~

~enjoyed

  

CastleGuard
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5 posted 2007-08-16 10:15 AM



Thank you, bel1e, curious I was hoping to be...

a poem...

about a poem

CG

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