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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2007-07-17 12:43 PM

You've got me in
   the palm of your hand
There to cradle...
   ...or to crush.

I have no will
   where you are
      no strength
         no sense

Every breath I take
   tastes of you
Every thought I think
   is painted with you

You're there
   in every moment
   in every word
   in every need

You've overwhelmed me
and you don't even know it.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-07-17 01:17 AM

I can sense the smoldering passion in your emotive and impassioned words.

EA

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-07-17 01:20 AM

beautiful and romantic

truly beautiful again

enjoyed

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

3 posted 2007-07-17 04:30 AM

I loved this! I could relate to it so much and loved the power and intensity of your words

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2007-07-18 12:27 PM

Oh... *soft sigh*... I like this so much!!! To cradle or crush... how very true... how beautiful!!!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2007-07-18 12:27 PM

oops... meant to library this! *S*

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2007-11-30 01:26 AM

hmm..hauntingly familiar...(Perhaps we are "soul sisters"...lol)

I too, had this to say; posted 08-09-2000:

YOU HOLD ME

You possess the very soul of me...
Do you know
You hold me in the palm of your hand?
You have the power
to crush me,
or to cradle me--
To warm me,
or to leave me cold...
You dwell within my waking thoughts.
You frequent my dreams--
My dreams...
I want to see you there.
Will you meet me when i close my eyes?
Somewhere in the misty corners
will you lurk
To ensnare me as i stumble past--
To hold me as you whisper,
"shhh, Dont speak..."
Not now--
the words will wake the moment.
Dont speak.
Dont answer.
Just meet me in the shadows
To take my body as well as my soul--
Or gently please
return my soul to me...
You hold me
in the
palm
of
your
hand...

© Copyright 2000 dgvarner - All Rights Reserved
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Seems we've been in similar situations....
feelin' this!
g

Gumpy
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 143
Canada

7 posted 2007-11-30 02:23 AM

A very nice read.
"You've got me in
the palm of your hand
There to cradle...
...or to crush."

So true.
Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2007-11-30 08:54 AM

Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2007-11-30 11:27 AM

good read

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2007-12-01 03:36 AM

Enjoyed...James

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

11 posted 2007-12-01 11:54 AM

This made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up.Absoutely beautiful

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