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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fluidity In the resource of giving rain I beseech the ear of the magician For gently intimate cognition Fall away the silver drops of yesterday Let it go, the future has no precedence These dreams I seek by far smack decadence Both hands guide the flow My lips move, still moist with linger Under pretense of a thunder strike Bellow, the skies cast over But tears or watering minds mingle So I swim, moving with the current Conditions of whim, floating with the wind Saying as I feel, river, raft or reel Waterfall, guides tenderly what cannot speak For wet, can melt that business casual physique Hiding what for sure you cannot pry to promenade Only for the showering affection this façade As longing is a victorious sea, when love is scented fluidity Copyright Kkh 8/14/07 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My lips move, still moist with linger Under pretense of a thunder strike Bellow, the skies cast over But tears or watering minds mingle So I swim, moving with the current Conditions of whim, floating with the wind Saying as I feel, river, raft or reel _____________________________________ Much enjoyed this piece Kathleen, especially these above lines. Nicely done lady. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I LOVE: “gently intimate cognition”; “love is scented fluidity”; “Conditions of whim, floating with the wind” Applause!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really fine one, TD....the words flow perfectly and enhance the feel of it!  ....jo |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
A lovely piece. I like the opening very much. "In the resource of giving rain I beseech the ear of the magician For gently intimate cognition" |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and I love... "Fall away the silver drops of yesterday" beautiful images here TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed this, especially: "As longing is a victorious sea, when love is scented fluidity" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Only for the showering affection this façade As longing is a victorious sea, when love is scented fluidity" Even in make believe there is hope, simply because thought is fantasy without action. With action that facade becomes reality; and built with care a bearing wall. Your writings always have a way of making the mind stretch out in search of some very deep meaning. I very much enjoy your work. JL  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As longing is a victorious sea, when love is scented fluidity Very powerful ending line. Love it!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My emotions and imagination were pulled along with the tides of your liquid words. Loving hug, EA |
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