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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-08-14 07:13 PM

Light softly shines
across the stillness
as morning silhouettes reflect
wet shimmers

a midsummer’s touch

then she shivers

when greeting the banks
with fingertips entwined
reaching upwards unto silvery skies

still freshly damp with the dew
of two united
blending morning hues
into a silence broken only
by the low moans sounds
of her rhythmically swaying

shuddering in orchestrated waves
of motion, pure ecstasy,
oh how mesmerizing, is she
in lulling song
of captivating sighs

where the winds, alone
can hear her cries

as she dances in veils
of blue on blue
where sky meets sea

It is there
that her shadows return

forever haunting me.

{revised 8-14-07}

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2007-08-14 08:05 PM

~such a captivating spill~~

WOW

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-08-14 08:26 PM

grand-fine 'write'...wonderful 'read'!

serious applause!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-08-15 08:02 AM

Many thanks to you both for your time here.

amberhues
Member

since 2006-11-01

Posts 93

4 posted 2007-08-16 05:54 AM

Beautiful writing Donna.

[This message has been edited by amberhues (08-16-2007 07:51 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2007-08-16 08:34 AM

Bri, so good to see you here. Glad you liked...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-08-16 05:53 PM

Nice...James

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2007-08-16 11:57 PM

"as she dances in veils
of blue on blue
where sky meets sea

It is there
that her shadows return

forever haunting me."

I hope a frame comes with this beautiful painting.

JL

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2007-08-17 07:13 AM

very nice....
nice imagery and form.. the style suits you well ma'am..and I am impressed...
indeed

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2007-08-17 07:34 AM

James thank you m'friend. Oh, it has
been awhile since I have seen the ocean
rise to meet the skies in the morn,
but it truly is an unforgettable sight
that remains with me in the sweetest
of memories. Thank you, sir.

JL, no frame just an old vision
that I try to keep fresh in my mind.
Thnk you.

Capt thank you for your time and eyes
here and for reading. You are appreciated.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

10 posted 2007-12-01 05:08 PM

Awww, Gentle One, so lovely. You soothe with your word art - and cast such erotic images with the whisper of your pen.

A

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2007-12-01 06:22 PM

Another Gem

ARCTIC WIND

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