Open Poetry #41 |
The Art Of |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Compromising in thought, searching for the sunset, edging dreams seemless in their wake takes more "art of" than the living of reflections. Masquerading in style, secrets tunneling the need change the yield that pains the heart, as a Good Morning arises unspoken but seen beyond a glance. Pretending "to be or not to be" is a question strolling the mind, resisting the hold that strikes the truth seeding a dream that may or may not be. The first time may be the last time, a rare moment when perfection is treasured to keep for those days when through my words you see the sheerness of my heart. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. The first time may be the last time, a rare moment when perfection is treasured to keep for those days when through my words you see the sheerness of my heart. . Now that's poetry John . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and the sheerness of your heart, is a beautiful thing to behold. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
John, it is not often I get a response from you...and I treasure this one Thank you Donna, I am just trying to survive the summer heat and the beauty of this breeze of a day. M |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. M, That last stanza is the poem. John |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you again, John~~ M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, this is just beautiful. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~~~you've captured the moment wonderfully in this, my friend~~~
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This is QUITE fine! serious applause!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have to agree with John... |
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