Open Poetry #41 |
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As One |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Shadows may fall into the earth as the sun races into the night sky. Stars may twinkle, invitingly....do you hear their sigh? Rains may dampen the earth, muddling the mix of soil until a single grain fall no more. And ever, ever shall the birds fly, the air cool, the waters flow into the oceans near...For only they stand between us....between me, between you....as our breaths mingle and merge as one. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I hear the sighs, see the birds and feel the ocean sweet air...thank you for giving me a moment of delightful thought Hugs Lee J. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
It must be that old spice you're wearing! Ahoy. ![]() A beauty. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So softly lovely sir Magnus....a beautiful sigh..... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
TD caught me up with her reply... I loved hugging my dad, and his Old Spice... so this all has left me with a satisfied grin. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely writing, BJ, you ole' romantic devil, you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
been working on those swoon tactics I see m'friend... this is softly pleasing and i am sure one to cause a few sighs as the ladies read and dream... well done... indeed |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
romance belongs to you Barry and does indeed cause sighs sigh... |
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